Thorns and thistles

Categories: Writing, Theatre

So, a month and a half ago I went to my first New Play Project performance, in the courtyard of the JFSB here on campus. It was fairly low-key, with just one row of audience members. I wasn’t expecting much. But I was surprised. The plays were short — roughly ten minutes each — and yet they still made a difference. The short story of theatre, if you will. After the performance they passed around a clipboard asking for people to write down their e-mail and whether they were interested in volunteering, whether that be with playwriting or directing or acting or what have you. I decided then and there to write a play. And nothing happened. (This is not uncommon in my life. :))

A month later, I went to their “Roots” festival, and again I felt compelled to write something and submit it. That was a Friday, and the deadline for the Religious Plays submissions was the following Tuesday. Saturday morning in the shower, an idea popped into my head, and right away I sat down and wrote out a six-page draft. (Well, after I got dried off and dressed, that is.)

After getting feedback from friends and revising it pretty much every day over that weekend, I sent in my latest draft and crossed my fingers. Now, since this was my first play, I wasn’t expecting much. In fact, I was kind of hoping they’d reject it, because I didn’t really know what to do if they did accept it. :)

Shortly after that the script selection committee met and decided to provisionally accept it, which meant they’d give me two weeks to revise it; if it was good enough at the end of those two weeks, they’d produce it. So I took their feedback and started rewriting.

At the end of the first week, I went to their workshop (they hold one every Wednesday night) with my newest draft and prepared to be flayed alive. :) I didn’t really know anything about playwriting, after all — I’ve watched scores of plays, but that doesn’t make one a playwright. But I was pleasantly surprised. We read the play aloud (they had me cast my actor-readers) and then spent an hour discussing it. Even though my play needed lots of work, getting the critiques wasn’t really painful at all, and I came out energized and excited for those revisions.

After that, I had till last night to make my revisions so that the script selection committee could make their final decision. Up until the second-to-last draft, I wasn’t sure I was even in the ballpark — it felt like every change I made was making the play worse. After all, eight drafts had burrowed me so far into the play that I felt I couldn’t really get out and see it objectively.

But I’m pleased to announce that an hour ago I got an e-mail saying I made the cut. :) The play will be performed October 11, 12, and 13 at 7 p.m. each night in the Bullock Room at the Provo City Library. (It’s part of a set entitled “Thorns & Thistles,” and the other plays are really good, too.)

As it happens, auditions for all four plays are tonight and tomorrow night from 7 to 9 p.m., so if you’re interested, please audition! (And if you know anyone who might be interested, pass the info on.) Tonight’s auditions will be somewhere on campus — once they get a room, they’ll post it on the board outside the Nelke Theater in the HFAC (and I’ll leave a comment here). Tomorrow’s auditions will be in the Bullock Room on the third floor of the Provo Library.

So now I’m hoping that I don’t cringe too much to see my writing up on stage, brought to life. No more hiding behind the Internet. :) (And now I should have more time to blog, by the way.)

Update: Tonight’s auditions will be in F 556 in the HFAC (fifth floor).

 

Comments

 
1. Julia

Ben,
Congradulations on your play. I am excited to see it! I am sure it will be great. Any hints as to what it is about?!? Oh, well I guess I’ll find out soon enough. ;-)

 
2. Holly

Congratulations! I am looking forward to seeing it. I’m glad you’ll have more time to blog now :)

 
3. Katherine M

Oh, hey, you made it! Congratulations! I’m going to audition tonight, but I don’t know that I’ll be able to be in any of the plays because I have to be out of town October 11th.

 
4. James Meyer

Ben,

Rock on, buddy! I’m so excited for you that your play made it! One more tally to add to your list of literary accomplishments!

 
5. Anna

Congratulations!

 
6. Andy

Congratulations! I would come see it if I didn’t live hundreds of miles away. Are you going to post the script somewhere? I like the ideas of having short plays and a random-volunteer-run theater.

 
7. Holly

Ben, I thought you said you’d have more time to post now ;)

 
8. e

Congratulations. That’s just great!

 
9. Katherine F

Congrats again.

Thanks for letting me read your drafts–I’m excited to see the final version.

 
10. Ben

First off, auditions went well, and we’ve got our actors. Last night I went to the first little bit of rehearsal and I think it’s safe to say that it’ll be done well. It’s kind of weird in a way to see my work acted out, but going through all those revisions has gotten rid of the cringe effect, so I’m actually rather excited to see it. We’ll have rehearsals every Tuesday/Thursday till the show opens. (I’m not going to go every time, since I don’t want to be a dominating playwright; I’ll just pop in occasionally to see how it’s going and answer any questions that come up, but for all intents and purposes I want them to treat me as if I’m long dead.)

Julia: It’s about sharing the gospel.

Holly: I thought I’d have more time, but then the ward directory ate up all of it. But I finished that yesterday, so I’m back onboard and raring to go.

Katherine: It’s a pity, but maybe I can pull together a performance some other time, if there are enough people who are interested and can’t make it during the normal time.

James: Thanks! :)

Anna: Thanks! :)

Andy: Thanks! :) Yes, I’ll post the script after the run of the play. (I’d post it right now, but I think it’s better to wait, for the sake of those who are actually going to come see it.) But if you want I can e-mail it to you.

e: Thanks! :)

Katherine: Thanks, and thanks for all your feedback, too. :) (And if any of the rest of you would like to read drafts of future work and give me feedback, just let me know. I try not to inflict my work on unsuspecting bystanders. ;))

 

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